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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Nowadays, sport is becoming a part of
life
 which is attracted billion
people
 in the world.
Besides
 leisure activities, extreme
sports
 from hang-gliding to mountain climbing are quite popular. Despite these activities can rick
people
's
life
, I believe
this
 is a good trend.
First
 of all, the participation of these brings
benefits
 of heath, a fit body, like other
sports
. It stretches the limits of our body little by little
thus
 helping us become stronger.
Moreover
, risky
sports
 help to contribute to confidence and motivation which
benefits
people
 to overcome stress in their
life
 and risky in their work.
Secondly
, the participants can get over their fear during playing time
that is
 very helpful to build strong physical and mental as well as willpower...
ect
Correct your spelling
etc
.
Moreover
, risky
sports
 help to contribute confidence and motivation which
benefits
people
 to overcome stress in their
life
 and risky in their work.
Furthermore
, the experience of dangerous games makes wonderful memories, and it is the best way to get rid of monotonous
life
. From my point of view, extreme
sports
 give us a sense of achievement when we get to the top of the mountain, and it is extremely happy of victory. In conclusion,
people
 participate dangerous
sports
 for diverse reasons, some of which are
benefits
 gained for health. I am in favour of trying these and it should be encouraged for the future.
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