Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?

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Nowadays,
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international
travel has become popular worldwide. While many tourist attractions,
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as museums and historical sites are visited by tourists, inhabitants hardly visit. In
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behind
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problem and examine possible ways to address it. To
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begin
with, there are two reasons
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behind
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.
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, museums and historical sites are too
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for residents to visit.
For example
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, Musse du Louvre was visited by more than 100 million visitors in 2018, and almost half of them were aiming
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for tourism
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.
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there was a queue of around 300 meters outside of the museum, and visitors needed to wait for more than one hour.
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to
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, members of local
communites
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communities
tend not to be
interestead
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interested
in local
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facilities
, since they do not enough
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knowledge
about that. On top of that, there are two possible ways to encourage inhabitants to go
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cultural
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places, including historical sites. At
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, making the better environment that community people are able to go to
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places.
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, deciding the residents only dates may
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help
to ease the confusion.
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, giving native people a free pass might work to encourage them to
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go
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there.
In addition
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to
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, authorities have better provide the historical education
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related to
falicities
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facilities
and organize a tour to familiarize citizens with museums. To conclude, there are two possible causes of
this
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problem which are that
such
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facilities are too
crowede
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crowded
crowed
by tourist, and citizens have
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interests
on
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in
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them. To solve
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this
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ploblems
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problem
, authorities should enhance natives to go there, and improve
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their understanding
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on
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of
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the
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hometown.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural heritage
  • tourist attractions
  • interactive exhibits
  • perception
  • civic pride
  • engagement
  • community outreach
  • curate
  • cultural institutions
  • historical significance
  • sustainable tourism
  • resident benefits
  • local patronage
  • preserve
  • educational initiatives
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