Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Opinions regarding the efficacy of modern
crime
prevention approaches are divided. Some claim that adequate policies to constrain criminal
activity
are insufficient and need refinement, if not restructuring, while others claim that adequate policies currently exist. To clarify,
incarceration
is the primary form of punishment for most felons while fines, community service, and probation usually befit most convicted of misdemeanours.
This
essay will focus on punishment for felonious
activity
. Those who believe that current
crime
prevention models are insufficient cite statistics detailing the incessant existence and growth of
crime
rates.
Such
statistics show that many areas of
crime
are increasing – at best, they remain stagnant. If
this
is true, obvious conclusions at least include that current judiciary adjudication practices (namely
incarceration
) need improvement.
First
, the threat of modern
incarceration
is said to be inherently problematic: a) it may not effectively deter those seemingly predisposed toward criminal
activity
and b) it may not effectively deter whimsical criminal
activity
of those
otherwise
non-criminally minded.
Second
, lengthy exposure to prison often produces convicts who become psychologically traumatized, more aggressive, and more inclined to reoffend.
Therefore
, it is believed, prison confinement cannot be optimal in addressing
crime
.
Nonetheless
, others claim that current models, especially
incarceration
, addressing criminal punishment are sufficient. Rehabilitation is given as a primary justification. Prisoners have access to many forms of rehabilitation which include vocational training, various types and denominations of religious services, and a prolonged time for contemplation on their wrongdoings. Vocational training offers potential employment upon release while religious exposure and contemplation offer reflection, edification, and potential redemption.
In addition
, prison protects society from offenders at least while they are incarcerated.
Hence
, regarding felonies, it is believed
incarceration
is both justified and necessary. In conclusion,
crime
prevention strategies are debatable, arguably non-unifiable, and inherently problematic.
Nonetheless
, many
such
strategies, especially
incarceration
, are historically universal, arguably irreplaceable, and arguably necessary. If other means of preventing
crime
can be developed and proven effective
then
society will benefit. At present,
incarceration
is necessary, but not sufficient.
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