Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Opinions regarding the efficacy of modern
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prevention approaches are divided. Some claim that adequate policies to constrain criminal
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are insufficient and need refinement, if not restructuring, while others claim that adequate policies currently exist. To clarify,
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is the primary form of punishment for most felons while fines, community service, and probation usually befit most convicted of misdemeanours.
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. Those who believe that current
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prevention models are insufficient cite statistics detailing the incessant existence and growth of
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rates.
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statistics show that many areas of
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are increasing – at best, they remain stagnant. If
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is true, obvious conclusions at least include that current judiciary adjudication practices (namely
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) need improvement.
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, the threat of modern
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is said to be inherently problematic: a) it may not effectively deter those seemingly predisposed toward criminal
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and b) it may not effectively deter whimsical criminal
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of those
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non-criminally minded.
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, lengthy exposure to prison often produces convicts who become psychologically traumatized, more aggressive, and more inclined to reoffend.
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, it is believed, prison confinement cannot be optimal in addressing
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.
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, others claim that current models, especially
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, addressing criminal punishment are sufficient. Rehabilitation is given as a primary justification. Prisoners have access to many forms of rehabilitation which include vocational training, various types and denominations of religious services, and a prolonged time for contemplation on their wrongdoings. Vocational training offers potential employment upon release while religious exposure and contemplation offer reflection, edification, and potential redemption.
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, prison protects society from offenders at least while they are incarcerated.
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, regarding felonies, it is believed
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is both justified and necessary. In conclusion,
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prevention strategies are debatable, arguably non-unifiable, and inherently problematic.
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, many
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strategies, especially
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, are historically universal, arguably irreplaceable, and arguably necessary. If other means of preventing
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can be developed and proven effective
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society will benefit. At present,
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is necessary, but not sufficient.
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