Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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It is often argued that the advancement in artificial intelligence

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contribute positively to human life in the upcoming years.

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, there is an increased concern about the human ability

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to the existence of and control of sophisticated

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and computers. In my opinion, I would agree with the former view because the advantages of

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development outweigh its

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. One of the paramount reasons for considering advanced technology as a merit in peoples' future

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is that it facilitates the way they are living their

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doing their jobs.

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is because computerized devices and programs are well-known for solving and analyzing complex data

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and rapidly, which would enable humans to perform their tasks effectively and concentrate on the assignments that have a higher priority. Some routine occupations;

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as filing clerks,

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employees will be able to save their energy and use their skills and qualifications in more important tasks.

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technological development would make individuals'

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more balanced and active.

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, some would believe that

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emotion and logic.

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is because it relies only on number and statistics and makes decisions

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to sentiment and

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can not replace doctors in treating patients

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more human interaction rather than telling rigid facts.

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type of development would lead to

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if they allow

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and intelligent programs to be part of the decisions that

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decisive.

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, one of the advantages of contributing

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intelligence to human life is that it has the merit of simplifying the complexity of home and work

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, but others are still believing that it has

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as it does function like

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technological advancement in their daily

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because it can enhance the quality and the efficiency of their lifestyles ; regardless

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Task Response: The essay partially addresses the prompt by presenting both views, but the reasoning is underdeveloped. The opinion is not well-supported with clear arguments.

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Coherence and Cohesion: The essay lacks a clear and logical structure. There is a need for better organization of ideas within paragraphs. The conclusion should also summarize the main points more effectively.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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