Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Due to hefty
digitalization
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even the
house
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and workplace events are started getting done by robots and appliances . Since the lifestyle of people has changed immensely and converted into busy schedules ,these
machines
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aids to make life easier.
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is a positive development as technology and industrial revolution has provided greater opportunity to manage
time
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,perform the
task
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with accuracy and precision and
also
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give helping hand to a disabled person and homemakers.
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of all,Automated
machines
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for home or
work
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chores are very feasible and practical .
secondly
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, on the single clicks/buttons few tasks gets done .
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but not the least, it curbs famine of
time
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while
work
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is getting done a person can focus on something else which makes them multi-tasking.A good example of
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is many old mechanical washing
machines
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are abandoned by customers as new automated
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one's
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are launched. you need to just click the button on the machine and connect to the water outlet and laundry is done in the
time
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set
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previously workplace printer/xerox have only
one
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purpose ,
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however
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the launch of 3 in
one
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printer plus xerox has removed 2
machines
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for
one
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and many pages can be printed at once on command by the user.
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,
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development has given
work
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offer to the disabled and individuals who have restricted movements due to body limitations.A plethora of
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people
works
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on the design and architect of the product from their laptop or computer.For an instance ,an enormous amount of disabled workers
work
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for high Multi brand companies
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as LG,Samsung,Hitachi. Many working women
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have
time
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to complete their
house
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task
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with ease,
in
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addition
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they can focus more on their career and family rather than on
house
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chores.To illustrate , cooking food ,washing dishes,clothes,cleaning of
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house
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the house
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has been replaced from human to machinery appliances
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as microwave, dishwasher,vacuum cleaner, washing machine.Once you commence the machine it
perform
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performs
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automatically and complete the
task
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and notify the user once done. To conclude, robots are a good development in the field of workplace /home. They tend to do the
task
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with adequate precision and in stipulated
time
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moreover
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one
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doesn't need to worry about the tasks pending at home as they know these appliances got their back.Since
the
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technology is evolving
everyday
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new items are giving chances to all kind of people to
work
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and earn their bread.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Artificial intelligence (AI)
  • Humanoid
  • Machine learning
  • Task allocation
  • Operational costs
  • Manual labor
  • Disruptive technology
  • Ergonomics
  • Unemployment
  • Cybersecurity
  • Technological singularity
  • Redundant workforce
  • Innovation
  • Ethical considerations
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