In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In
this
modern era, most people plan to have a
first
child
at a later age.
This
trend
is common
popular
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and popular
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among
the
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society. I believe that
finacial
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financial
status,
happy
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a happy
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life, fullfill the needs
these
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apply
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are
behind
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the reasons. I think
this
improvement
have
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more disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
To begin
with, most young people are delaying
to
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their
first
child birth
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childbirth
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since their marriage because nowadays women have more
empowernment
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empowerment
unlike in the past. Late
perganancy
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pregnancy
can lead to the parents
will become
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becoming
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a
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mature person when they are
grownup
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grown up
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their
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with their
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children
as a result
, they can
fullfill
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fulfil
to
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their
child
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children's
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expectation
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expectations
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and dreams.
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,
most
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in most
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western
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countries new couples are postponed to their
parentshood
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parents 'hood
because they
first
settle
to
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for
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their
carre
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career
life after that they think about their new
child
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child's
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plan.
This
trend
gives mature fathers and mothers
bringup
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bring up
bring
to their babies with good knowledge and
expeience
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experience
.
On the other hand
, late
pregancy
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pregnancy
brings more health
issue
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issues
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such
as
diabets
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diabetes
, miscarriage,
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and high-blood
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high-blood
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high blood
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pressure.
This
trend
creates
generation
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a generation
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gap between fathers and babies repercussion, the mothers do not understand
about
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their
sons
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son's
sons'
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thought
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thoughts
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and
this
is
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always
making
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creates
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issues between both.
For example
, dealy
preganacy
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pregnancy
affects fertility strength because after thirty age might be reduced fertility repercussion,
many
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and many
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fertility centres have been starting. people should give
most
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the most
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importance to their
first
kid like their career.
To conclude
, the young fathers and mothers decide to delay
a
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offspring certainly
gives
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causes
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many health
issue
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issues
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both
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for both
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mother and toddler. I think
this
trend
have
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has
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more demerits
outweigh
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that outweigh
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the merits. I hope
this
trend
is inconducive for the next generation.
Therefore
, folks do not postpone to their
first
toddler.
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