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In developing countries, Some people believe that their government should introduce new technology to people in order to improve their quality of life. Others believe that offering free education would be more advantageous in the long term. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#countries #people #government #technology #quality #life #education #term
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fast
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the fast
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 -paced world, many
people
 think that their
government
 should invent some new
technology
 to humans so they can improve their quality of
life
 but some other believe that
their
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 should provide
other offer
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another offer
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such
 as
education
 without any cost because they think it is more beneficial for
people
.
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 discussed these both views and my opinion in
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 paragraphs.
To begin
 with, at a present
time
,
technology
become
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very
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 important part of everyone's
life
 .
People
 use immense of
technology
 in their daily
life
such
 as mobile phone,
mircowaves
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microwaves
microwave
,computers and so on thinking of many
people
 that council should introduce advance
technology
 for
improvement
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the improvement
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 of their
life style
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lifestyle
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.
For instance
,if
government
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the government
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setup
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set up
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 gyms in public parks
than
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then
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 that would be very beneficial for humans
life
 because some
people
 can't afford to go
in
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 public gyms but still they want to do exercise and live
healthy
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a healthy
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life
. On
the
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another
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 side, Thinking of some
people
 that they want free
education
 in their
liseure
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leisure
lecture
time
also
 if
government
 provide
education
 without any cost it will be
very
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 good opportunity for fellow how are not able to go
school
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to school
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 and universities to get their
education
for example
 nowadays families are often more mobile they don't have enough
time
 for children to teach them about history so if
government
 give free
education
 about history its good for young generations. To conclude,in my view if organisations give new
technology
 like gyms its good for
people
 health and they enjoy their quality
time
 during exercise with their friends and family
also
 if
government
 provide free
education
its
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 more beneficial for young children to get knowledge about their history. so these both options have different benefits.
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