Nuclear energy is the better choice for meeting increasing demand. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Energy
demand
is drastically increasing, and to cope with this
, nuclear power
is considered to be the best option. I partially agree with this
statement and in this
essay
I will Add a comma
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analise
the pros and cons of Nuclear Correct your spelling
analyse
analyze
energy
and suggest why we must also
consider other alternatives.
Many countries are trying to develop new technologies to deal with the increased demand
of
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for
energy
. However
, nuclear powered
stations are nowadays still the most profitable solution. In fact, even if it is considered to be dangerous by many people, Add a hyphen
nuclear-powered
also
because of previous accidents, nuclear energy
production is by far the most powerfull
source of Correct your spelling
powerful
energy
production. Another key aspect of nuclear energy
is that it does not produce any pollutants. In addition
to that, Nuclear power
stations are almost limitless.
However
, thanks to new technological developments on alternative energies, we will might
be able to deal with the Remove a modal verb
apply
energy
demand
with more natural and safer options, such
as; solar panels, wind turbines and hydroelectricity. These options are far less dangerous compare to the nuclear ones, and they take advantage of the natural recources
given by our planet. More investments should be made on these solutions to be able to increase their efficiency and Correct your spelling
resources
thus
, try to replace or at least reduce the need of
nuclear Change preposition
for
power
.
In conclusion, nuclear power
is the most powerful way to produce energy
but also
the most dangerous. This
,
should be taken into account and alternative energies must be developed in order to cope with the Remove the comma
apply
ever increasing
Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
demand
of
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energy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite