Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Some

people

's idea is that unfavourable situation should be embraced,

such

as

job

dissatisfaction or financial constraints. While others debate it is better to improve

such

conditions .

This

essay will discuss two main ideas

opinion

1 and

opinion

2.

Opinion

1 will discuss reason s some person should embrace poverty and will

also

discuss the reasons while some Individuals should improve their

job

status or financial situations.In my ,

opinion

I believe

people

should boost their income by involving themselves in other jobs that can improve their income.

People

should sometimes accept what they have and be contented with Their wages,

this

is imperative because u satisfaction can lead to depression and it can

also

prone one to

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someone who works in the hospital not satisfied with his or her salaries can even condescend so low to steal from the patient on

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. Moreso, some persons who think so much about their

job

dissatisfaction every time are prone to depression, the reason is that they want to get what they do t have and eventually lose their mind.

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people

who spend more than 50%of their wages on transportation have the tendencies to get frustrated and

subsequently

end up in rehabilitation home. On the other ,hand individuals should learn how to improve their financial status. Being satisfied with poverty is completely preposterous and should not be encouraged. There are millions of opportunities today in our society,

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entrepreneurship is a key point in the prevention of poverty.

People

should be encouraged to learn various skills in order to support Their current financial status.,

Besides

it is good to look for various

job

advertisement and always work with the one that has the highest pay. Savings is another way of managing funds in order to have enough to set up the business. The reasons are that when things become too difficult one should have something to fall back to.

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setting up a business centre will mean that financial support will be enhanced. What is paramount is that

people

take up jobs that make them feel happy. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed two opinions 1 and 2 and stated reasons

people

should be satisfied with Their jobs and

also

the

second

thought discussed why individuals should enhance financial income by acquiring entrepreneurial skills to avert lack.