Nowadays foreign visitors show more interest in the museums of a country than its local residents do. Why is this happening? What can be done to attract more local residents to the museums of their country?

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industry is a
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business
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from foreign countries
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holidays
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museums
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from the other parts of the world and pay for it, while local habitants suppose that they are familiar with
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of museums and other
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tourists
spots have plenty of cultural side effects.
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culture
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, the government have to
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tackled
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issue and
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enthusiastic
citizens to visiting
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history of their culture, by
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offering
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entrance
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especially
in high seasons or holidays. To sum up, the main reason for
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increasing
the
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portion
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of foreigns to local
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of tourists sites
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is
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referred
to decreasing the
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of flight tickets and tours, which prepare a suitable condition for travel of persons with middle income.
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tourists are the main source of resources in touristy cities, the governments have to increase
people
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awareness about their culture and their
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historical
places by
offerring
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offering
them low or free of charge
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entrance
cards.

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