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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to larg shopping centers or malls to do their shopping . Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Recently, we have witnessed that people prefer to go
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 shopping
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instead
 of buying from local shops. while there are some disadvantages , I personally believe that the benefits are far more. On the one hand, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some positive points from increasing
purchase
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 of malls. From their point of view ,customers are able to have
wide
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 variety of choice easily.
For instance
, for getting new jeans ,
buyer
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the buyer
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 can observe many goods in shopping
center
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 until
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 their
favorite
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 brand .
Furthermore
, consumers can compare the variety of price.
On the other hand
, some people believe that there are negative points for travelling malls. From their perspective, the vast number of them are overcrowded and
also
, shoppers should be restricted by
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 schedule because they have open and close time.
However
, in my opinion ,the majority of the shops are available for consumers and people should not worry about its timetable. In conclusion,
although
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prefer to go shopping
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 have some drawbacks, the merits are more prominent .Buyers have a wide range of choice and they can pick something up with the amount of money who have.
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