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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays

#music #world #country
Music
 is the greatest gift mankind has ever
recieved
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received
. In fact, the world is blessed with various kinds of
music
 and it varies from
one
 place to another.
This
 essay intends to discuss the
neeed
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need
 for
music
 and the
imperation
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imperative
importation
 of
music
in
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 both
traditional
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the traditional
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 and international level.
World
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The world
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 as a global village has a vast variety of
music
 and it plays a colossal role in each and
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everyone's
every one's
everyones
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 life. And
also
, it is
one
 of the proven ways to help the process of curing or to mitigate the problem related to
majority
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the majority
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diseases
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of diseases
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.
For instance
,
music
 therapy is
one
 of the approved treatment in pain management. As
,
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 it has the power to deviate
one
's thought and helps them to escape from
the
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real life
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 problems even if it is for a few seconds or minutes.
Moreover
,
music
 has the ability to control individual emotions. Because, it is said that, a person tends to listen to the
music
 if he is happy and focus on the lyrics if he is sad.
Therefore
, it is really important to select the genre of
music
 as it can affect
mood
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 of a person and has the capability to change it.
Besides
, there
are
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 difference in the form of
music
 depending upon the region or country.
Eventhough
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Even though
,
music
 can be enjoyed despite
of
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its language,
the
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traditional
music
 provides a sense of belonging.
Furthermore
, it represents the culture of an area and it
make
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 use of its native language, which helps the listener to understand the meaning and seek pleasure from every bit of it. At the same time,
as a result
 of advancement in the field of technology, everyone is connected to everyone through the means of
internet
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the internet
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.
Hence
, it has given tremendous popularity to
the
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international
music
.
However
,the advantages of traditional
music
 outweigh the popularity gained by international
music
. To conclude,
i
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 believe that,
music
 as an art form, needs to have a clear understanding by the
one
 who listens and regional
music
 is the best possible way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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