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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Group
work
 is provided to bring out team-building
skills
 amongst students whereas individual assignments are given to test their knowledge. Some
children
 prefer to
work
 as a team,
however
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 the rest are more into participating alone. I think
this
 thought varies from one individual to another. The following paragraphs will discuss the pros and cons of both sides of the topic. Brain teasers, timed quizzes potentially increases a
person
's cognitive and analytical thinking
skills
. When
children
 feel they are devoid of these
skills
 they attempt to
work
 in groups and as a
,
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result they are not benefited. School chores relating to art, paints and sketches are set to bring out the creativity in a
person
.
Children
 should realise that pairing up for
such
 events will not help in portraying their individuality.
Also
, group participation sometimes leads to loss of credits.
For example
, roleplays in schools are to be given by a single
person
. If
children
 collaborate in delivering a speech not everyone will be equally appreciated. There is an increasing chance that the
person
 delivering the closing note might be celebrated.
In contrast
 to the aforementioned information, there are school assignments and events where
children
 can collaborate with their peers to be successful in their
work
. Students should be aware that it is imperative to possess team building, leadership, adaptability
skills
 and they can only be developed while working as a team.
For instance
, a school experiment to build a model that saves rainwater cannot be done as a solo project. It might involve various tasks from research, configuration and test the models to
finally
 present it. Students can take turns and
work
 on every stage individually and
finally
 combine their
work
. To conclude, though it is a
person
's thought process that lets him decide,I personally feel that the type of job that they are entitled to do is a contributing factor in making the decision of working in groups or as a solo.
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