Under British and Australian laws, a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

In
contemporary
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the contemporary

The noun phrase contemporary era seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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era,
this
is grave problems in
these two country
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this two country
these two countries

It appears that the plural demonstrative these is modifying the singular noun country. Consider using a singular demonstrative or a plural noun instead.

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. I see eye to eye with
this
decision. I will discuss
in
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this in

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upcoming
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the upcoming

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paragraph. The
first
and foremost point, which come
in
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to

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my mind
that is
"history" governments should provide
history
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the history
a history

The noun phrase history seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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to everyone. Which is very helpfully for find
somthin
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something

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. On
otherside
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other side

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, there is
very
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a very

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famous dictum " one man's trash and it's another man's treasure"
likewise
some people think
government
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the government

The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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should not provide. To conclude everyone
have
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has

It appears that the indefinite pronoun everyone does not agree with the verb have in your sentence. Consider changing the form of the verb.

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own
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their own

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view but my point of view is more important for me.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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