Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Agriculture and the animal kingdom both are heavily impacted by human
waste
in terms of environment,food or even drinking water.A plethora of individuals
believes
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that human being activities can not be amended in favour of nature whereas a few have a different opinion
such
as we are master of our own region
hence
, our action should convert the adverse effect to positive.
This
essay will discuss both views and have an opinion that we can change the negative impact to positive by introducing alternative solutions for
plastic
,industrial
waste
or even by changing people habits to reduce household
waste
.
Firstly
,the vast majority of detritus has been created by industrial plants like steel
/
iron
/
nuclear where they produce hazardous radioactive
waste
and poisonous gases. An example
for
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this
is Japan currently hold 100 gallons of radioactive infused waster which is
waste
from the nuclear plant and after decomposing the molecule the concentration is left
with
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5%
therefore
, the government has decided to release the water in the ocean. South Korea has opposed
this
decision and gave the explanation that it will affect the sea ecosystem and even fisherman's occupation harshly.
Secondly
, if we handle those
waste
later comes the packaging and
plastic
material dump which fills our landfill . For an instance 80% of
plastic
products can not be recycled
hence
,lying and making our landfill bigger day by day.Every household produces at least 2 kg of
plastic
when they buy grocery
/
clothes and even medicine.
On the other hand
, A few people believe action speaks louder than words. We can impose a heavy ban on companies making and releasing hazardous
waste
moreover
local bodies can
also
put a fine on authorities who are in favour of deforestation. For an instance, Maharastra legislation has introduced a bill to prosecute organization with
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crore
/
tree fine if they cut the Aravali forest and build an industry on it.100 Crore fine has been imposed in Delhi Oklama industries who released foam-based toxic substance in Yamuna river.
Plastic
creation and decomposing can
also
contribute to
this
cause by regulating paper bags in the market .To illustrate Indian PM has banned
plastic
use from 1 October in order to honour Swach Bharath Abhiyan.
This
forced all companies to switch to paper-based packagings and even appliances are getting delivered in cardboard boxes with foam in place of
plastic
. In my opinion, we are a writer of our own destiny , we can guide our audience to follow more environment-friendly options and save the planet from global warming and climate change issues like glaciers and sea melting at the north pole. To conclude,human activities do impact animal and plants negatively ,
in
addition
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it adds to polluting our own ecosystem and atmosphere.If few changes in a person's habit can make healthy environment
then
we can surely follow it like living zero
waste
life ,less
plastic
more paper options
also
correct decompose of wet and dry
waste
.

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