Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Agriculture and the animal kingdom both are heavily impacted by human
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in terms of environment,food or even drinking water.A plethora of individuals
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that human being activities can not be amended in favour of nature whereas a few have a different opinion
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as we are master of our own region
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, our action should convert the adverse effect to positive.
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essay will discuss both views and have an opinion that we can change the negative impact to positive by introducing alternative solutions for
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,industrial
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or even by changing people habits to reduce household
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,the vast majority of detritus has been created by industrial plants like steel
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iron
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nuclear where they produce hazardous radioactive
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and poisonous gases. An example
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is Japan currently hold 100 gallons of radioactive infused waster which is
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from the nuclear plant and after decomposing the molecule the concentration is left
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5%
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, the government has decided to release the water in the ocean. South Korea has opposed
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decision and gave the explanation that it will affect the sea ecosystem and even fisherman's occupation harshly.
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, if we handle those
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later comes the packaging and
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material dump which fills our landfill . For an instance 80% of
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products can not be recycled
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,lying and making our landfill bigger day by day.Every household produces at least 2 kg of
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when they buy grocery
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clothes and even medicine.
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, A few people believe action speaks louder than words. We can impose a heavy ban on companies making and releasing hazardous
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local bodies can
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put a fine on authorities who are in favour of deforestation. For an instance, Maharastra legislation has introduced a bill to prosecute organization with
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crore
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tree fine if they cut the Aravali forest and build an industry on it.100 Crore fine has been imposed in Delhi Oklama industries who released foam-based toxic substance in Yamuna river.
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creation and decomposing can
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contribute to
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cause by regulating paper bags in the market .To illustrate Indian PM has banned
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use from 1 October in order to honour Swach Bharath Abhiyan.
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forced all companies to switch to paper-based packagings and even appliances are getting delivered in cardboard boxes with foam in place of
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. In my opinion, we are a writer of our own destiny , we can guide our audience to follow more environment-friendly options and save the planet from global warming and climate change issues like glaciers and sea melting at the north pole. To conclude,human activities do impact animal and plants negatively ,
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it adds to polluting our own ecosystem and atmosphere.If few changes in a person's habit can make healthy environment
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we can surely follow it like living zero
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life ,less
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more paper options
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correct decompose of wet and dry
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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