In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

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As global wealth increases, there has been a surprising decrease in reported
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of
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in developed
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. In my opinion,
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is due to the fact that lifestyle changes and it teaches that money is merely a baseline requirement for
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. The main reason individuals in wealthy
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are less happy today relates to how people live. In the past, people had fewer free time options and
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led to more time being outside and socializing. Modern lifestyles are predicated around isolation.
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, the average worker or student after a long day is likely to spend at least a few hours watching movies on Netflix, messaging friends, checking social media, and listening to music. These
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habits would seemingly elevate
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levels
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but they are in fact a passive means of achieving low
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of contentment and pleasure. In aggregate,
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minimum threshold of commitment pales in comparison to more substantial activities. The lesson from
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development is that wealth is only the foundation of
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. Many would claim that money has no relationship to
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,
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,
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is naive since families living in poverty must obsess over simple matters
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as shelter and sustenance. Money,
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, serves to guarantee basic necessities and
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entail other elements,
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as the sense of belonging to a part of a larger society.
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can be seen most clearly in
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that score high on
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surveys
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as in Northern Europe. Individuals in these countries tend to and feel they are part of a community and culture that requires active engagement. These societies prioritise involvement with others and community responsibility and shun the insular hobbies that have led to dissatisfaction in other developed
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. In conclusion, lower
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of
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are due to modern ways of living and
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illustrates the relative importance of wealth.
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itself should not be an aim but rather a result of pursuing worthier life goals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic growth
  • Material wealth
  • Affluent societies
  • Social cohesion
  • Isolation and loneliness
  • Work-related stress
  • Professional expectations
  • Aspirations and reality
  • Environmental degradation
  • Sustainability
  • Consumerism
  • Comparison
  • Life balance
  • Mental well-being
  • Community relationships
  • Sustainable development
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