The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

People

are amazing creatures.They are smart, flexible, adaptive and their number continues to grow. But it wasn’t always so.The human population grew very slowly in the past.Many factors are were the reason

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as illness, climate change, social problems. These days, the Earth’s population is constantly growing. The increase

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life expectancy allows

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to live longer.

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is facilitated by advanced technologies in modern medicine, vaccination, social support, healthcare programs.It gives

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opportunities to prevent and be able to cure (treat) disease . A society

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more educated and many

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can provide themselves

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decent position with a high paid in a company.It means they can afford to have several children because they have

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financial problems. There are other circumstances

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as poverty, the lack of planning family, the fall infant mortality.

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, economists are worried

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rising world population will lead to

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problem.

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is more complicated than seems at

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glance. I agree that continued rise is

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largest issue faced by humanity today. The overpopulation will affects the environment, ecosystems.

The nature

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suffers and doesn’t have time to recover. Developing and undeveloped countries are unable to provide

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people

with quality food. Is increasing the risk of unemployment and territorial conflicts. In conclusion, I believe that

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continuous growth is a huge problem

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today’ world.In a number of

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some solutions already are taken

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but needed new ways of solving

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issue which depend on the level of education,

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birth control, strong laws and effective government.