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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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People
 are amazing creatures.They are smart, flexible, adaptive and their number continues to grow. But it wasn’t always so.The human population grew very slowly in the past.Many factors are were the reason
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this
such
 as illness, climate change, social problems. These days, the Earth’s population is constantly growing. The increase
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 life expectancy allows
people
 to live longer.
This
 is facilitated by advanced technologies in modern medicine, vaccination, social support, healthcare programs.It gives
the
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 opportunities to prevent and be able to cure (treat) disease . A society
is became
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 more educated and many
people
 can provide themselves
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decent position with a high paid in a company.It means they can afford to have several children because they have
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financial problems. There are other circumstances
such
 as poverty, the lack of planning family, the fall infant mortality.
The scientists
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, economists are worried
that is
 rising world population will lead to
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 problem.
This
 is more complicated than seems at
first
 glance. I agree that continued rise is
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 largest issue faced by humanity today. The overpopulation will affects the environment, ecosystems.
The nature
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 suffers and doesn’t have time to recover. Developing and undeveloped countries are unable to provide
the
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people
 with quality food. Is increasing the risk of unemployment and territorial conflicts. In conclusion, I believe that
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continuous growth is a huge problem
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 today’ world.In a number of
states
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 some solutions already are taken
,
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 but needed new ways of solving
this
 issue which depend on the level of education,
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birth control, strong laws and effective government.
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