Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some people contend that

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ability

classes

are more beneficial for children’s development than streaming them on the basis of judgement about their academic

abilities

.

However

, from my perspective, I disagree with

this

contention. Admittedly,

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ability

classes

provide a better environment for children’s

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development. In

such

classes

, children with different

abilities

study together and in

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they can learn from one another.

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example, a student, who is good at academic study but weak in dancing or painting, can learn how to dance or paint

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his peers. In

this

sense,

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ability

classes

allow

students

to develop their

abilities

in different subjects

instead

of only academic

abilities

. Despite the argument above, I believe streaming

students

brings

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more benefits to

teachers

and

students

. As for

teachers

, separating children with better academic

abilities

from others facilitates effective teaching.

This

practice helps

teachers

to control their

students

more conveniently and easily. Compared with mixed

ability

in which teacher should consider

students

’ differences when they are using teaching methodologies, streaming makes

this

situation simpler. To be more specific,

students

are at the same level of academic

ability

in a class, and in

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teachers

can use the same methodologies for them all. In

this

way, the narrower the spread of

ability

in the class, the more convenient the teaching can be. In the final analysis,

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ability

classes

are beneficial for

students

’ versatile development, but in my opinion, segregating

students

based on different academic

ability

is better for both

teachers

and

students

.