Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling is precious to save the environment.
Garbage
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The garbage

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from houses go to dumping grounds
instead
of reusing it as
the
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a

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recyclable material. To embark upon, the foremost reason behind
sky touching
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sky-touching

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dumping grounds is that individuals are not reprocessing the waste. In spite of saving the material for other
use
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,use

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people throw it into garbage bins.
For example
, plastic bottles can be used as a pot for plants or to store small items, which can
also
save money. In term of physical benefits, the well-being conditions of elderly people with pets are more favourable compared to those without pets, since not only do they have to take care of themselves, __ the responsibility that
ensure
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ensures

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their love one being fed and well looked after encourages them to become even more active. Due to these extra activities,
this
though might not have an obvious influence on their health, but at least
this
could help them to avoid bad living styles. I
some time
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sometimes

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ielts
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IELTS

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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