More and more fathers are taking break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, the cost of living has increased to

such

an extent that working has become a necessity for

both

the parents in a family.

However

, at times

this

results in father and mother being unable to take out

time

for their children.

This

essay discusses whether

this

is a better solution or not followed by an opinion.

To begin

with, everything has become so costly these days that to fulfil the expenses related to education, travel and other things it is obligatory for

both

the ancestors to be a wage earner so that their kid gets a quality life.

For instance

, for admission of a student in a good school sometimes predecessor have to give

donation

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so

consequently

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both

of them have to continue their job to arrange funds.

Moreover

, the school fees

is

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also

rocket high currently.

Therefore

, for a better upbringing of their

infant

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it is somewhat mandatory for the couple to take employment full

time

.

On the contrary

, as guardians are not able to manage

time

for their youth it results in an invisible gap between them. Teenagers do not have their forerunner by their side at the

time

of need when

both

of them are performing.

This

has an adverse impact on their mind.

Although

, forbear struggle for the betterment of their son even

then

they cannot buy love and affection with the money they earn. The genitor should keep in mind that some things can never be replaced. If one of them takes a break from his career for taking care of their baby it would make a huge difference

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the life of their toddler. The offspring would become happy and satiated. In my opinion, the begetter should try to take

such

a job which helps them to take out

time

for the youngster as well. To exemplify, either of the birth

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can take a teaching job because it leaves a person with a lot of

spare

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. To conclude, a juvenile is a priority of every pater. If they work for their adolescent only

then

they should be aware that it follows the same outcome

that is

,

advancement

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of their minor.