Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. To what do you agree or disagree?

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the process of cutting woodland might be lead to critical causes as particularly in dense forests owing to
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would create a major loss of animal lives and human lives.
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, I concur that denies the logging and apply some measure to solve
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process.
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and foremost, it is generally known that without wood no one can live longer so, save the tree and logging method lead many problems
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as reduce the number of forests which lead to a decrease in the availability of food to other grazing animals.
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, like vegetarian human and , an animal they might be searching for food, but they are failed and enhance mortality.
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, it prevents rain in a forests area and other regions of the earth due to all may be thirsty and looking for water and lead the war.
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, in the jungle book movie, everyone is finding water but one river is taken over by a lion and other animals are thirsty and
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they die.
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, the split of some shrub is necessary but sometimes like a lot of tree in the forest
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going in ageing age which are dry, hard and does not form a new branch again and occupied much more place.
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, anyone can cut that tress and use for different purpose
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as in shelter, fire and making paper and tissue,
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use in numerous industrial works. In conclusion, everyone should take some obligation to stop logging in the jungle and take especial manoeuvre to solve
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problem. I think logging is important but not much more to lead detrimental consequence on animal and human life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sink
  • global warming
  • indigenous tribes
  • livelihood
  • displacement
  • cultural erosion
  • soil erosion
  • water cycle
  • humidity levels
  • rainfall patterns
  • droughts
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • climate change
  • logging
  • rain forests
  • habitats
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