Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Solving pressing global issues seem to be better if it is done by a joint effort of every country, according to some;
however
, I partially agree with the statement as some problems only managed nationally. In this
essay
my views shall support in the following paragraphs.
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First
and foremost, global warming is an urgent problem that requires a multi-level approach. This
is because even though one country has zero carbon emission, they
could be affected Correct pronoun usage
it
from
the uncontrolled pollution of Change preposition
by
neighboring
nations as well. To illustrate Change the spelling
neighbouring
this
, Finland is eco-friendly, but this
place has been dangerously hit by global warming such
as heavy snowfall, prolonged summer and so on, this
has occurred due to green gases have been produced by some Asian regions. Therefore
, a collective initiative is highly recommended.
Despite the fact that,
there are some issues Remove the comma
apply
need
to be entirely controlled within the state even it makes damage Correct pronoun usage
that need
world-wide
. Terrorism Correct your spelling
worldwide
that is
a global threat, which has been identified as a government -sponsored
program in some part of the world. Due to Add a hyphen
government-sponsored
this
, under no circumstance
the government should act to Add a comma
,circumstance
wipe-out
and start taking necessary steps to counteract Correct your spelling
wipe out
this
since the devastating consequences do not limit in
one place. Change preposition
to
Thus
, it is Correct your spelling
clear
clean
that how to handle these kinds of problems is purely determined by the authority of the nation, hardly, others can get Correct your spelling
clear
involve
in their home affairs.
In conclusion, there are some Change the form of the verb
involved
argue
that having an international effort could prevent the majority of the world’s problems, I support Correct pronoun usage
who argue
this
view to certain
extent. It is recommended that every nation must play its own role both at Add an article
a certain
individual
and global level to encounter against evils.Add an article
the individual
an individual
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