Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Solving pressing global issues seem to be better if it is done by a joint effort of every country, according to some;

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, I partially agree with the statement as some problems only managed nationally. In

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my views shall support in the following paragraphs.

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and foremost, global warming is an urgent problem that requires a multi-level approach.

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is because even though one country has zero carbon emission,

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could be affected

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the uncontrolled pollution of

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nations as well. To illustrate

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, Finland is eco-friendly, but

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place has been dangerously hit by global warming

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as heavy snowfall, prolonged summer and so on,

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has occurred due to green gases have been produced by some Asian regions.

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, a collective initiative is highly recommended. Despite the fact that

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there are some issues

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to be entirely controlled within the state even it makes damage

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. Terrorism

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a global threat, which has been identified as a

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program in some part of the world. Due to

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, under no

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the government should act to

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and start taking necessary steps to counteract

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since the devastating consequences do not limit

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one place.

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that how to handle these kinds of problems is purely determined by the authority of the nation, hardly, others can get

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in their home affairs. In conclusion, there are some

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that having an international effort could prevent the majority of the world’s problems, I support

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view to

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extent. It is recommended that every nation must play its own role both at

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and global level to encounter against evils.

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