People spend less time at home than they used to. What are the reasons for this change and what are the effects on society and individuals?
In the modern world, the way of spending stay at
time
with people
has significantly changed than was decades ago. People
spend more time
outside of the home
and this
is because of several factors, I think.
Nowadays, many people
are getting busy than ever before. There are many reasons cause this
situation, and one of them is advance in technology. Due to the rapid development of technology, sometimes people
are getting struggled with their jobs more than ever before in order to keep their steps with the latest technological advancement. For example
, my sister who works at a commercial company as an accountant,
has been forced to work for extra Remove the comma
apply
time
in the latest months because their company introduce a new ERP system for their daily financial and business activity. Moreover
, social media sites and other information resources allow people
to engage in various communities, groups, and open ways to involve in different activities. As a result
, people
become interested in participate
in different kind of events and willing to spend Change the verb form
participating
time
with them. Such
factors make people
lack time
Add the particle
to
home
.
On the other hand
, spending less time
at home
might lead to some negative effects both on individuals and society. Spending less time
with their family makes the connection between family members less closely. Talking, caring and having time
together helps people
to build a strong warm connection with family members. But spending most of their time
outside of the home
makes people
have less time
for their family. This
situation may lead to some negative effects in future ,especially for children. If the parents do not spend enough time
for
their children and do not give them enough care, children become to feel like they are rejected and it may lead to become with negative behaviour in their future. If the number of Change preposition
with
people
with negative behaviour are
increasing, it would definitely bring some negative impact on society.
In conclusion, spending Change the verb form
is
time
outside of the home
is due to different reasons for people
. Having less time
at home
might be some kind of fun or pleasure for some people
,but it might be lead to an unwanted negative outcome in future such
as affecting children's behaviour in a negative way.Submitted by arash.dejkameh on
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