Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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company rather than moving to other areas is considered

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beneficial by some;

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, there are some people who oppose

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statement. In my opinion, it is reasonable to change the

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but stick to the same profession as

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enriches experience and skills. On the

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hand, opponents of the

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consider that when

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employee works in various fields, he would have a lot of exposures and ideas. Whoever possess these qualities seems to be hired by a well-known

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in the future. Nowadays,

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, most of the companies looking to hire multi-talented personalities, hardly, job seekers with having

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knowledge in

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area might be hired.

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,

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making frequent job changes has many professional advantages.

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, the proponents of sticking

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the same

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for the entire

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have noticed that it can bring many

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achievements.

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, the professionals would be accepted by both colleagues and higher officials for their commitments and hard work;

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, it seems that the employees would be offered higher positions and other incentives

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pension scheme and perks from the firm. To illustrate

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, the majority of the industries in India follow

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regime to promote their workers, due to

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, a huge number of staffs tend to remain with their

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employer

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. While considering the professional growth, remaining in a job

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is good. In conclusion,

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people have

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opinion on whether stay in

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work in their entire

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or move to other areas, I firmly consider it

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the preference of the staff. It is recommended that achieving the best

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should be the ultimate aim.