Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Working in

one

company rather than moving to other areas is considered

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beneficial by some;

however

, there are some people who oppose

this

statement. In my opinion, it is reasonable to change the

employer

,

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but stick to the same profession as

this

enriches experience and skills. On the

one

hand, opponents of the

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consider that when

a

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employee works in various fields, he would have a lot of exposures and ideas. Whoever possess these qualities seems to be hired by a well-known

employer

in the future. Nowadays,

for instance

, most of the companies looking to hire multi-talented personalities, hardly, job seekers with having

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knowledge in

a

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one

area might be hired.

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,

by

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making frequent job changes has many professional advantages.

On the other hand

, the proponents of sticking

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the same

employer

for the entire

career

have noticed that it can bring many

career

achievements.

In other words

, the professionals would be accepted by both colleagues and higher officials for their commitments and hard work;

therefore

, it seems that the employees would be offered higher positions and other incentives

such

as

reasonable

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pension scheme and perks from the firm. To illustrate

this

, the majority of the industries in India follow

this

regime to promote their workers, due to

this

, a huge number of staffs tend to remain with their

first

employer

. While considering the professional growth, remaining in a job

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for ever

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is good. In conclusion,

although

people have

different

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opinion on whether stay in

a

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one

work in their entire

career

or move to other areas, I firmly consider it

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up on

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the preference of the staff. It is recommended that achieving the best

career

should be the ultimate aim.