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Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encourage to focus on art rather than other subjects?

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Nowadays, not only
art
 considered a subject to teach but
also
it
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 considered a
way
 of communication. There are several factors which can have a great impact on the
way
 of the
children
's education with
art
 and I agree that all of the
subjects
 which we teach to our
children
 are as important as each other. In today's world, many
subjects
 are taught to our
children
 with
a
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pre-planned aim's. Some basic
subjects
 are required for them to improve their knowledge. I believe that
art
 is a great
way
 to boost our young generations' creativity and develop them and it can help them to develop other skills in the future.
As a
result
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art
 must be put on the daily routine of young people.
On the other hand
,
art
 is
a
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 effective
way
 of learning and teaching other
subjects
 for the underages. Many teacher's combine the various
subjects
 with
art
 and games to make them attractive for them.
For example
, numbers can be easily taught if parents mix
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 with painting and learn them to their
children
.
Moreover
,
although
art
 is one of the important things to teach to our
children
, other sides of the education must be considered as well as each other. Our brains are divided into main part and another half of the every one require mathematical education for development. As result, both
art
 and mathematic are needed to teach
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the new generation and lead them to complete person. In conclusion,
art
 is one of the important
subjects
 which plays a vital role
on
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 both learnings of the
children
 and teaching of the parents. In my opinion, though many of the
subjects
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 early age must be
tought
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taught
thought
 with
art
,
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 side of the brain development must be considered
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