Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that
music
has the power to unite people
with various cultures and societies. People
enjoy singing from every part of the world, and it speaks the same language, which embodies human emotion, joy, love and sorrow. I completely agree with the point of view and will give the reasons below.
Music
can certainly reach across national boundaries and bring people
together, perhaps, the best example of this
could be the GANGNAM STYLE song, the public who watched it more than four billion on the YouTube app from all around the world. Not only that but , also
when going to some new concerts you may find this
song and family enjoy singing it whatever their ages and nationalities. For sure none of this
could happen without soul .
More than that , music
can help some developing countries which they can not find enough food. One of the best examples of this
could be the LIVE AID Concerts which took place back in the 1999s and which broadcast to a global audience. In addition
, two events were held at the same time one in the UK and the other in the US, and the objective was to raise funds for famine relief in Ethiopia. The concerts were a huge success both in the number of community around the world who watched and their impact on international awareness for famine. Therefore
, I believe that music
is the planet global language.
In conclusion, music
is unique in its ability to connect people
together regardless of their ages, cultures and nationalities.Submitted by ms.056 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite