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Mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have a big influence on to what extent you agree or disagree

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The system of communication that makes
news
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 and entertainment accessible to the majority of
people
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 through books, newspapers, radio, television and the Internet is called "
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media
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". It has the power to change the thinking of
people
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. I fully agree with the writer’s notion and the reasons behind my claim are described in the following paragraphs.
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 with, how does
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media
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 influence
people
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's ideology.
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, whatever the
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media
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 represents to the public is from reliable sources, and
that is
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 why
people
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 believe in the
media
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, be it newspapers, television or radio.
Secondly
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,
mass
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media
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 represents visual impact and helps
people
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 to be a direct witness of any kind of
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.
As a result
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, viewing any report allows
people
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 to shape their point of view on a particular topic.
In addition
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, due to advances in communication
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,
people
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 are now able to find out the correct information if they are mistaken by a misadventure
unfortunately
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.
On the other hand
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, it is undoubtedly the fact that the
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 has the ability to lead the ideology,
although
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 sometimes some spam
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 leads
people
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 to any unpleasant
news
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 that
people
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 can get through false belief.
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, according to an article in India, 15% of
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 reports must be from fake
media
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 and
this
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 can affect our thinking. In conclusion,
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 it is undeniably true that newspapers, television and radio all these sources can lead our ideology but there are some sources
which
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that
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 represent fake data to the
people
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.

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