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chirograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city ‎of Kolkata.‎

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The chart below compares the
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 and the precipitation of every month ‎during the year in Kolkata.‎ As it was evident from the graph, the peak meaning in the rainfall is achieved in ‎July.
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, compared aspects do not match. The highest
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 point is ‎about 31 degrees is achieved in May.
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,
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 the
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 and the ‎precipitation hit the lowest point in December. In January, we can see a slight ‎increase in
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 parameters.‎
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, we can see a clear overall tendency. The increase in
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 parameters ‎starts in December and rises steadily until May. From June to July, we can notice ‎a skyrocket in precipitation while the
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 decline gently. The
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 ‎remains stable for four months, whereas the rainfall
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 falls a little but
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 dips ‎twice from more than 300 mm to 150 mm.‎ To sum up, Kolkata's weather tendency is an uprising from December to May in ‎
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 and to July in precipitation, and
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both
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 parameters are declining.‎
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