Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people believe competitive sport,

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regardless

of team and individual, must have no room in the

school

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curriculum

.

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essay will completely agree with

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statement and will give examples

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related

this

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. Pupils must not

forced

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to rivalry in order to preserve their

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mental

heatlh

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health

. Some teachers think that competitive

activities

can encourage

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student

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the student

a student

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to be ambitious and reach accomplishment.

However

, these events do not bring success. By

the

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contrast,

they

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the

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damage

to

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their

physicology

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physiology

irretrievably.

For example

, let us think about a student who never won a competition. His

friends

takes

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award

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an award

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by winning the

rivallary

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rivalry

he

feel

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feels

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humiliated unless he

win

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wins

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a competition. In these years, many students

are not be

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able to get well

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their teachers. From my point of view, the underlying cause of

this

issue is compering students each other, which trigger hate pupils their

friends

.

Furthermore

, according to many

investigation

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, the major cause of

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rise in the number of children who go to

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a psychiatrist

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is traumas

that

is

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experienced in the

school

.

For instance

, I

was not be

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able to run fastly when I was in primary

school

.

Moreover

, I have never won a race activity in the

school

and never rose to prominence among my

friends

.

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leaded

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to was made fun

off

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me by my

friends

.

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gave rise to I needed long-term

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psychological

treatments. In conclusion,

myself

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, as a person who exposure

far-reaching

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consequences of competition

activities

, I advocate that the compulsion of abrogating

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competitive

activities

in

school

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the school

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cirriculum

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curriculum

. If these

activities

continued to

be took

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place in the

school

cirriculum

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curriculum

. We would encounter cataclysmic consequences.