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Now days more and more people buy and use their own cars . Do you think the advantage of this trend for individual outweigh its disadvantages for the environment ??

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Recently ,
people
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 are used to purchasing and driving their own
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 . The merit of
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 idea is more than the demerit . In the following essay , both the positive and negative points will be discussed. The power full disadvantage of having a private car would be the fact that automobile' s fuel emission not only creates
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pollution
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environmental damage but
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 of disasters as the result of global warming.
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 , if
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 buy
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 , they prefer to drive
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 rather than public transportation.
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 , the main reason for appearing the
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air
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pollution
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 and global warming is greenhouse gases manufactured from bad fuel of vehicles which cause
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ecological issues .
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 , ices through the seas and oceans are melted because of global warming and the ocean surface level goes up and many floods and tsunamis happen that demolish the environment .
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,if the public is used to consuming private vehicles , more bad fuel will be generated so universal warming and
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pollution
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 as the harmless problems in the environment will appear.
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 , reducing environmental destruction would be the unnecessary disadvantage of attention
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 to purchase private automobiles .
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 , consumption of public transportation is profitable for our surrounding , establishing it needs more spaces to compare with
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railway need to use more space
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 the natural environment .
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, the more
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 drive by their vehicle , the less natural places and sightseeing will be destroyed to build public transportation . In conclusion , despite the fact that providing own
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 can
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 of taking some natural spaces , it is valuable . Because drawback of
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 ecological issues
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pollution
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 and disasters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Personal mobility
  • Convenience
  • Reliance
  • Public transport
  • Enhancement
  • Personal safety
  • Surge
  • Traffic congestion
  • Environmental degradation
  • Air pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Carbon emissions
  • Global warming
  • Wildlife habitats
  • Economic impacts
  • Public transportation infrastructure
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