Now days more and more people buy and use their own cars . Do you think the advantage of this trend for individual outweigh its disadvantages for the environment ??

Recently ,

people

are used to purchasing and driving their own

cars

. The merit of

this

idea is more than the demerit . In the following essay , both the positive and negative points will be discussed. The power full disadvantage of having a private car would be the fact that automobile' s fuel emission not only creates

air

pollution

as

an

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environmental damage but

also

increases the

amount

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of disasters as the result of global warming.

Moreover

, if

people

buy

cars

, they prefer to drive

it

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rather than public transportation.

Also

, the main reason for appearing the

the

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air

pollution

and global warming is greenhouse gases manufactured from bad fuel of vehicles which cause

of

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ecological issues .

For instance

, ices through the seas and oceans are melted because of global warming and the ocean surface level goes up and many floods and tsunamis happen that demolish the environment .

Therefore

,if the public is used to consuming private vehicles , more bad fuel will be generated so universal warming and

air

pollution

as the harmless problems in the environment will appear.

On the other hand

, reducing environmental destruction would be the unnecessary disadvantage of attention

people

to purchase private automobiles .

However

, consumption of public transportation is profitable for our surrounding , establishing it needs more spaces to compare with

cars

.

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,

construction

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a

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railway need to use more space

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the natural environment .

Therefore

, the more

people

drive by their vehicle , the less natural places and sightseeing will be destroyed to build public transportation . In conclusion , despite the fact that providing own

cars

can

be

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cause

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of taking some natural spaces , it is valuable . Because drawback of

this

idea is stranger than the gain because of creating

terrified

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ecological issues

such

as

air

pollution

and disasters.