Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
The noun phrase Food industry seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun agriculture in your sentence. Consider removing it.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun industry in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The word aliment doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase local community seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase however. Consider adding a comma.
The noun phrase variation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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- for example
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- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example