Many believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of modern city. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public transport?

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developed countries have a good
infrasturcture
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infrastructure
in public transportation. All these
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to
modern
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the modern
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city
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topic both have advantages and the disadvantages. There are several advantages of
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transport system in the modern
city
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First
of all, many
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have a huge amount of population and have industries that
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air pollution.
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,
people
use
private
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vehicle
for
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visit
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many places.
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many
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public
transport
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such
as subway and buses are used to reduce
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pollution.
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, in
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city
,
people
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a value
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of time, for saving a time many
people
use public transport because it
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traffic jam. If one person
drive
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a car to go
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work
then
many
people
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car
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this
leads to heavy traffic in a
city
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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