Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagre

Many people believe that these days there are many issues all over the world which can be solved by
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cooperation. I completely agree with the statement that issues like pollution and
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health
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cooperation.
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discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, the most primary concern is pollution which is not a problem of a single country. It
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by all over the world. When the government of all
countries
together and discuss problems and
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they
can find solutions to tackle
this
issue.
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, a meeting conducted by Canada's prime minister with the authorities of five different
countries
in which they discussed
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nuclear power and find that nuclear power does not harm anybody.
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it is clear that
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solution can be found with
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cooperation.
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concern is health issues. There are
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numerous
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diseases which cannot be treated well by
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developing
countries
. Developed
countries
have a lot of sources of medicines and
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expert scientists who can find solutions
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diseases and can share
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with the developing
countries
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for instance
, In April 2021 covid19 wave 2 came in India in which more than 10 lakhs people got affected and 5 lakh folks died. At
this
time President of America came forward to help India with 2 lakh vaccination, masks and PPE kits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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