Some children start school when they are seven years old, while others start at the age of four.what could be the advantages and disadvantages of starting school very early

Some
children
start
school
when they are
seven
years old, while others start at the
age
of four. What could be the advantages and disadvantages of starting
school
very early? At
first
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I should say that no child decides for himself when to start
school
because usually young
children
like to experience a happy childhood, but some
families
let their
children
start
school
earlier than others who start
school
when they are
seven
years old and
this
can have different reasons. Some
families
decide to help their
children
along the way to succeed and they think when they start
school
earlier, they become the most successful person and each family do
this
in a different way. Some
families
decide to raise
children
with language or education classes from an early
age
for example
at the
age
of four, and some wait until a child reaches the
age
of
seven
to starts
school
, both of them have a number of benefits and
disadvantages
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children
. Some
children
who start learning at the
age
of four can learn faster because their mind is ready to learn quickly .For
this
,reason some
families
let their
children
start learning from an early
age
and they prefer to grow their
children
in a way that they themselves opt for learning and studying. They would obviously be able to answer some of the questions that they have in their mind. On the other ,hand there are those who are strongly against the idea of sending kids to
school
at a very early stage of life.An Iranian educational counsellor concluded that when
children
start learning soon , they will hate the lessons as soon as they start them, and some
children
will get tired and drop out of
school
, even at a young
age
, because some of them have been struggling to study and learn since childhood so they get fed up.Psychologists have come to the conclusion that
children
should start learning at an
age
when they are curious to ask questions and begin to find answers to the questions in their minds
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because at that time learning becomes fun and not boring.It always becomes useful for them and there are no disadvantages. I agree with
this
opinion that says education is useful for
children
when they go to it themselves and the best
age
to start learning is
seven
years old.Yet it very much depends on
children
.Some do not want to start learning ; they are an exception. In the end, I think nothing is mandatory and
families
should not force
children
to start learning at a particular
age
.
This
means no child should study at the
age
when they have to have a jolly childhood consists of playing with other
children
or spending time with family.
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