Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveller?

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more popular than ever in the

last

century. In

this

essay, I will look at the cause of the increase in

travel

and describe its advantages for our everyday lives. The main cause of

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numbers

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of

traveller

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travellers

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is the improvement

of

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transportation.

This

is because now we have aeroplane rather than camel or even ship that

take

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a very long time to reach your destination. The best example of

this

would be in the past if someone would

travel

from Saudi Arabia to China it took them more than three months by ship

while

these days could be less than 7 hours by plane.

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it

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, many

people

tend to

travel

and have the ability to explore other countries because travelling

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easier than before.

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, none of

this

could

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happening

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without the aeroplane. There are several advantages to travelling to other countries. First , it is an incredible way to learn about various cultures when you

travel

.

This

is because

people

get to learn a new language and interact with new and interesting

people

.

Also

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when

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people

travel

to London and visit some museums there and see the remarkable arts that reflect the society,

people

become more aware of customs , traditions and skin colours which are unique to a country and need to be respected by all .

In addition

, the second benefit is relaxation stress.

This

is because some

people

work in

such

a tough environment that has a lot of tasks to accomplish

with

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over

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a very long period of

times

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time

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each day.

For example

, the teachers who especially teach younger students in

the

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elementary school ,

they

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face many

struggle

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and stress because dealing with children is not that easy to handle so they need to have a holiday. As

result

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,

this

trip makes them feel more calm and comfortable . In conclusion , more and more

people

travelling because of the amazing transportation we have these days and

people

can afford it. There are some benefits of travelling

such

as

,

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learn

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learning

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about different societies and contact with new

people

.