Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

All living beings are

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part of an ecosystem and dependent on each other. It is our duty to protect

wildlife

. A few decades ago, humans made

zooes

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zones

zoos

for

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animals

for various purpose. Some individual

opine

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that

animals

in the

zooes

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zoos

zoo

zones

are not treated well and should be closed. While others believe that it is beneficial for endangered

animals

.

This

assignment indeed to describes both perspectives and I shall analyze my views on

this

topic. On the one hand, many people believe that

zoos

should be banned, they treated

animals

with cruelty. proponents of

this

view suggest that

animals

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feel

same

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type of emotions and feelings as we human does. If officials put

animals

behind bars

then

it

effects

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on

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their mental as well as physical health.

For instance

, in a recent study in India,

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say

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that many

animals

in

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zoos

have depression just like a person. Their health is not good in the zoo. Moving

further

,

animal

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the animal

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is belong

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to

wildlife

, they like to move around. Wild

animals

haunt

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other

animals

for their living and in the

zoos

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they forget how to predate. When

zoos

officials leave

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in the forest, they do not survive on their own. They need people to feed them.

However

, others feel that

zoos

are important to protect

wildlife

. The predominant reason is that many

animals

are on

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list and

zoos

are the only place where they save from haunters. To illustrate my point, in India, Tiger is going to extinct just because of too much haunting. The government keep tigers in

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zoos

and in

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wildlife

centuries.

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places are monitoring 24 hours by the officials.

Furthermore

, due to

deforestation

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many

animals

are forced to move to other places. They do not get their habitual environment

that is

why

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department

look

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after that

animals

and put them into

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zoos

for their benefit. In conclusion, I think that both statements have their strength

zoos

are needed for some endangered

animals

, in the

environment

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they like to extinct in a few years but save them in

zoos

and hope to

re-generate

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their population.

However

, it is

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staff responsibility to treat them properly and do not harsh them in the

zoos

.