Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
All living beings are
the
part of an ecosystem and dependent on each other. It is our duty to protect Correct article usage
apply
wildlife
. A few decades ago, humans made Use synonyms
zooes
for Correct your spelling
zones
zoos
the
Correct article usage
apply
animals
for various purpose. Some individual Use synonyms
opine
that Change the verb form
opines
animals
in the Use synonyms
zooes
are not treated well and should be closed. While others believe that it is beneficial for endangered Correct your spelling
zoos
zoo
zones
animals
. Use synonyms
This
assignment indeed to describes both perspectives and I shall analyze my views on Linking Words
this
topic.
On the one hand, many people believe that Linking Words
zoos
should be banned, they treated Use synonyms
animals
with cruelty. proponents of Use synonyms
this
view suggest that Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
have
feel Add the particle
tohave
same
type of emotions and feelings as we human does. If officials put Change the article
the same
animals
behind bars Use synonyms
then
it Linking Words
effects
Correct your spelling
affects
on
their mental as well as physical health. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, in a recent study in India, Linking Words
report
Correct article usage
a report
say
that many Change the verb form
says
animals
in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
zoos
have depression just like a person. Their health is not good in the zoo. Moving Use synonyms
further
, Linking Words
animal
Add an article
the animal
an animal
is belong
to Change the verb form
belongs
wildlife
, they like to move around. Wild Use synonyms
animals
Use synonyms
haunt
other Correct your spelling
hunt
animals
for their living and in the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
zoos
they forget how to predate. When Add a comma
,zoos
zoos
officials leave Use synonyms
animal
in the forest, they do not survive on their own. They need people to feed them.
Add an article
an animal
the animal
However
, others feel that Linking Words
zoos
are important to protect Use synonyms
wildlife
. The predominant reason is that many Use synonyms
animals
are on Use synonyms
endangered
list and Correct article usage
the endangered
zoos
are the only place where they save from haunters. To illustrate my point, in India, Tiger is going to extinct just because of too much haunting. The government keep tigers in Use synonyms
the
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apply
zoos
and in Use synonyms
the
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apply
wildlife
centuries. Use synonyms
Linking Words
This
places are monitoring 24 hours by the officials. Change the determiner
These
Furthermore
, due to Linking Words
deforestation
many Add a comma
,deforestation
animals
are forced to move to other places. They do not get their habitual environment Use synonyms
that is
why Linking Words
forest
department Correct article usage
the forest
look
after that Change the verb form
looks
animals
and put them into Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
zoos
for their benefit.
In conclusion, I think that both statements have their strength Use synonyms
zoos
are needed for some endangered Use synonyms
animals
, in the Use synonyms
environment
they like to extinct in a few years but save them in Add a comma
,environment
zoos
and hope to Use synonyms
re-generate
their population. Correct your spelling
regenerate
However
, it is Linking Words
Use synonyms
zoos
staff responsibility to treat them properly and do not harsh them in the Correct article usage
the zoos
zoos
.Use synonyms
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