Many people say that smoking should be banned while others say it is not a good idea. What is your opinion on this?

Many people opinion that smoking is injurious to health and is prohibited in India. While others disagree with
this
. I will discuss both opinions and followed by my opinion. On one hand, it is not healthy for our generation and leads to many serious health problems
such
as lung cancer. Youth have a habit of
this
and they will not change it because they think that smoking gives them a stress
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reliever
and calm their anxiety
besides
that it is not only in any medical record.
However
, smoking could
also
have a severe threat to passive smokers.
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, some doctors
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not smoke but inhale the smoke of
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smokers may
have a possibility of lung cancer.
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Therefore
, many men and women think
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smoking should be banned entirely, as it severely
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both active and passive smokers.
On the other hand
, many people against
this
idea
firstly
, they think that everybody has
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right to do things they like. Smoking is
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, and it is up to the individual
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whether
they would like to smoke or not. If
this
is the situation
then
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should take steps and make a
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complain
complaint
campaign
of smoking.
Secondly
Prohibiting smoking will
also
affect the financial condition as
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cigarettes
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so many workers. If smoking is wholly banned,
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then
a number of factories will be closed and will lead to
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unemployment rate. In my view, I support the
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that smoking should be banned in all areas because smoking is harmful to our health.
However
, before implementing the idea, the government has to have an alternative plan for the
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cigarette
factories workers because they may be unemployed. The authorities could enlarge and
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a new platform,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • personal freedom
  • illegal trade
  • smuggling
  • regulate
  • designated
  • non-smokers
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