Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?
Drawing,
musicsal
instruments Correct your spelling
musical
amd
film are getting priority in the study Correct your spelling
and
center
day by day than Change the spelling
centre
any
other institutions subjects and it should be immersed more time to the students. From my perspective, Change preposition
in any
this
proposition is not completely true.
It seems undeniable that people have to take arts, musics
and dramas to Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
accquire
recreational knowledge. Correct your spelling
acquire
As a result
, they have to take only one sided
phenomenon which is not fruitful in Add a hyphen
one-sided
hereafter
. Taking Add an article
the hereafter
idea
of another subject in school can help them to execute any things in any situations. Add an article
the idea
However
, some individuals consider it is not a wise considerstion
because a person Correct your spelling
consideration
have
to grab perfectly. Change the verb form
has
Thus
, taking a
Correct article usage
apply
Add a hyphen
one-sided
one
sided knowledge can lead him Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
a logical life. Change preposition
to
For instance
, if a man acquire
every idea he can do the entire tasks of a company. Change the verb form
acquires
On the contrary
, if a person grab
only arts or music he can render it perfectly.
Change the verb form
grabs
Moreover
, if a person acquire
everything he can support his country in Change the verb form
acquires
a disaster situations
. Correct the article-noun agreement
disaster situations
a disaster situation
Conversely
, a man need
only arts, music or drama to represent his country properly. Change the verb form
needs
For example
, a human learning various type of knowledge provide
Change the verb form
provides
voluntary
for his province. Change the adjective
voluntarily
On the contrary
, he has to take only one sided
subject to represent his state perfectly while he is travelling.
In conclusion, Add a hyphen
one-sided
variuos
types of Correct your spelling
various
idea
should be needed to execute all things properly. Add an article
the idea
an idea
However
, to create a smooth operation of any Institute there is no alternative way of one sided
learning to provide Add a hyphen
one-sided
a
smooth support of the country.Remove the article
apply
Submitted by Sadiq on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!