Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

Drawing,
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musical
instruments
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and
film are getting priority in the study
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day by day than
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other institutions subjects and it should be immersed more time to the students. From my perspective,
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proposition is not completely true. It seems undeniable that people have to take arts,
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and dramas to
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acquire
recreational knowledge.
As a result
, they have to take only
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phenomenon which is not fruitful in
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. Taking
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of another subject in school can help them to execute any things in any situations.
However
, some individuals consider it is not a wise
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consideration
because a person
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to grab perfectly.
Thus
, taking
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sided knowledge can lead him
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a logical life.
For instance
, if a man
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every idea he can do the entire tasks of a company.
On the contrary
, if a person
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only arts or music he can render it perfectly.
Moreover
, if a person
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everything he can support his country in
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.
Conversely
, a man
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only arts, music or drama to represent his country properly.
For example
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voluntary
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for his province.
On the contrary
, he has to take only
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subject to represent his state perfectly while he is travelling. In conclusion,
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various
types of
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should be needed to execute all things properly.
However
, to create a smooth operation of any Institute there is no alternative way of
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learning to provide
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smooth support of the country.
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