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Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means, others believe that these games are contributing to children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11.32- 42

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 map depicts information about the changes in Stokeford between the year 1930 and 2010. Overall, it is seen from the graph that a lot of farmland has been changed into houses.
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, the gardens have been replaced by
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retirement home. In 1930, Stokeford was a place with a lot of farmland. In the western, there was a river, named river stoke.
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, on the north side, there was a bridge where people could cross and come over to the village. There were
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 a few shops and a post office
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 to the river. On the east side, a small school was built where children could go for education. By the school, there were huge gardens and a large house. In 2010, The farmland got demolished and is been replaced by accommodations for the inhabitants.
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, the school in been enlarged as the population was growing in the village.
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, the gardens area was converted into a retirement home.
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