as countries become more developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes.

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Nowadays, most countries have seen a sharp drop in the birth rate because
people
have been becoming nuclear family rather than extended family. In
this
essay, I will discuss the main cause of
this
and its impact on society . There is no doubt that the cost of living has become more expensive than before.
This
is because of a high rate of taxes for most important things
such
as accommodations , groceries , and education. Actually , the best example would be , in Saudi Arabia most
people
were able to buy a villa 25 years ago while now the majority cannot , they can only have a flat.
Also
, there was no value-added tax but today there is ,
however
, there is no change for the
people
salary even after the VAT.
As a result
of
this
, most families have decided to have a smaller family so they can afford the cost of living. The main impact of small families on our society is mental health.
This
is because nuclear family tend to live alone and far away from their parents so they cannot have great support from their parents if they need help . The best example of
this
is , my friend Ahmed and his wife live in Dubai and their parents in Jeddah , sometimes they feel depressed and lonely , they need somebody to contact and encourage them but there are no family members nearby.
As a result
of
this
, they have become more introverted and just sitting at home and they do not have any desire to meet with
people
. In conclusion , there is no doubt that small families are more popular these days because of living cost .
Although
,
this
could lead to some mental health problems
such
as depression which is not useful for our society.
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