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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use, while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #animals #medicines
Testing of
medicines
 and cosmetics on
the
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animals
 has been
prevelant
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prevalent
since
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 a very long time . The
animals
 are tortured and deprived of their natural habitats in
order
 to
test
 these products . While some believe it is cruel to
test
medicines
 on
the
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animals
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animal's
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 others argue that it is the only way in
order
 to save
the
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mankind from ever
incraesing
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increasing
 diseases and viruses.
Its
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 important to analyse the two opinions in
order
 to come to a conclusion. There are people and NGO's who feel that testing
of
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medicines
 on
animals
 not only deprives them of their natural habitat but
also
 puts them in
life threatening
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 situation.
For instance
 , to
test
 certain specific
medicines
 certain species are made to go through various emotions. These
animals
 are over-worked and
also
 at times cut off food so as to
test
 them in extreme conditions. In case an animal cant the take the adverse environment created during these medical
tests
 and tend to lose control , it can
also
 be killed.
The
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life
 should be valued irrespective of
if
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it
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 belongs
of
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to
animal
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an animal
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 or a human.
On the contrary
 , certain people feel that these animal
tests
 are a necessity.
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 a long process to come up with a new
life saving
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 medicine and in
order
 to expedite the process animal testing is important. Certain members of the medical fraternity feel that most of these clinical trials are safe and are part of a later stage of testing. In the absence of these
tests
 , saving human
life
 from
the
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new and unknown diseases becomes difficult.
Hence
 in
order
 to protect
the
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humanity from
life threatening
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 diseases ,controlled animal testing is important. In my opinion , looking at the adversities caused by these
tests
to
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the
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animals
 , animal testing should be banned. During the various stages of these testing , the
animals
 go through various induced emotions which tortures them.
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 other testing alternatives
such
 as "In vitro testing" where human cells and tissues are modelled , should be explored.
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