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Children today have more responsibilities than the past. Some people think it has positive effects than negative ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

#children #responsibilities #people #effects #ones
Children are the nation builders. As everyone can see future of
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society in the children.Nowadays, it is mostly seen that they have more roles to perform as
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 with the past. One school of thought that the benefits outweigh the pitfalls,
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 others have
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 opinion. Both sides will be discussed in
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 paragraphs. To
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 with the pros of
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 trends, with the more responsibility the child become mature and disciplined. They acquire
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problem-solving skills,maturity, effective decision making and many more. As most commonly said that empty mind is
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 workshop, so that's why if more responsibilities will be incurred on youth, they will grow well and become multi-talented. They get oriented with their goals and get directions in
time
 to achieve them.New learning helps in sharpens the minds of the youngsters.
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better society and disciplined
enviornment
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environment
 that sounds necessary.
on the other hand
, there are some cons of
this
, as longs as it has many advantages but it destroys the
innocense
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 and snatches the most enjoyable age
time
 from them.They become mature before the
time
 and make busy their schedule in works.
This
 lead to reduces
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life
expentancy
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expectancy
 rate, more stress which leads to
motality
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mortality
 , morbidity.
This
 happens because which
time
 they
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 to spend with their friend with
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 mind, at that
time
 they get
responisilities
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responsibilities
 and live the materialistic
life
. To conclude, it is good to become a responsible person but happiness is
also
 matters. The balance is required because the child age
time
 is the only
time
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if
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 ends up with happiness that would become the most rememberable part of
life
 until death.Happening is the key
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healthy
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life
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