Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nobody can deny that some careers skills are valuable for
children
, at least in cases in which they can gain experiences and be paid reasonably. For some people, hHowever
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however
children
should be encouraged to have a job. This
essay will discuss both of these facets as well as present my own opinion.
On the one hand, Being employed at a young age
is likely to increase the chance of achieving financial independence. increasedoing
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increase doing
age
allows
financial independence. Change the verb form
allow
This
means that children
will no longer have to rely solely on their parents or guardians as they will be able to afford their daily life by themselves, reducing financial burdens such
as university funding on their parents. In addition
to this
, these children
will advance swiftly in their chosen career paths. Working for an establishment at younger
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a younger
age
from a very early age
tends to provide them more insight into the of the company, make them know within that company and therefore
be more employable subsequently
such
that in a case they have to go back to complete their studies and after graduation, they already have greater chances to be employed back to that workplacecompany
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On the other hand
, paid employment for adolescents could make them lose control ofon
spending. Correct your spelling
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This
can be explained that is
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hence
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workingthose
that worked at younger ages while growing up. Correct your spelling
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Secondly
, should those children
continuously make keep making an effort on
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times
, they have to work while studying, and Fix the agreement mistake
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which could lead to a reduced attention span in matters relating to their studies;,
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subsequently
, they may feel bored in learning and give up.
In my opinion, I agree that children
should completely concentrate on their studies instead
of working as it's more crucial for their future.Submitted by Eteacher
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