people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, parents are looking at their children needs, and they try to make sure they have a good future.
However
, they focus on their hobbies and how to make
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even better, but some
people
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it
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naturally or is it something that should be learned? In
this
essay, I will state how
people
think about
this
and their views and
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the end, I will give my opinion about it. On one hand, there is a great number of
people
who agree that newborn babies come with their talent and it is nothing to be learned. Actually, in sport there is a debate about two good players Messi and Cristiano, Messi’s fans are claiming that he is a player with a gift and he did not practice to be that good but
instead
this
is his nature, and they
also
say “ Cristiano is a player who does more practice and training in order to be good at football”.
On the other hand
, Cristiano’s fans do not agree with
such
an idea, they say “there is nothing wrong in
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to be good, it is totally fine and it shows that you are passionate about your career”.
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in practice makes perfect, and no one is born with a talent but we find ourselves in something and we do our best in it.
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the end,
people
still debating, and each side
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to his belief. In my mind, I think both groups are true, there
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talented
people
and there is who work to reach perfection, and we should focus on improving what we like to do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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