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people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, parents are looking at their children needs, and they try to make sure they have a good future.
However
, they focus on their hobbies and how to make
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 even better, but some
people
 wonder
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 it
coming
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 naturally or is it something that should be learned? In
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 essay, I will state how
people
 think about
this
 and their views and
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 the end, I will give my opinion about it. On one hand, there is a great number of
people
 who agree that newborn babies come with their talent and it is nothing to be learned. Actually, in sport there is a debate about two good players Messi and Cristiano, Messi’s fans are claiming that he is a player with a gift and he did not practice to be that good but
instead
this
 is his nature, and they
also
 say “ Cristiano is a player who does more practice and training in order to be good at football”.
On the other hand
, Cristiano’s fans do not agree with
such
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 to be good, it is totally fine and it shows that you are passionate about your career”.
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 in practice makes perfect, and no one is born with a talent but we find ourselves in something and we do our best in it.
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 the end,
people
 still debating, and each side
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 to his belief. In my mind, I think both groups are true, there
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 talented
people
 and there is who work to reach perfection, and we should focus on improving what we like to do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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