You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy with property but landlord has not been maintaining it well. Write a reply to Mr. Matthews. In your letter: Indicate your intention to stay give information about maintenance issues explain what you would like the landlord to do now

Dear Mr Matthews, I have received your letter, about renewing the contract and pay more rent. I'm interested to continue
further
stay since it is convenient for my office ,
however
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I would
also
like to highlight the problems which I'm facing. The central ac is freezing up outside due to that it is not working efficiently and the kitchen sink water is not flushing out properly. All these problems were already notified to you many times with photos through email and over the phone. It is almost a year ,
still
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it is not fixed. I would request you to take immediate action to fix the above-mentioned issues
,
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before the contract renewed. Yours sincerely Prabjeet

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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