You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy with property but landlord has not been maintaining it well. Write a reply to Mr. Matthews. In your letter: Indicate your intention to stay give information about maintenance issues explain what you would like the landlord to do now

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Dear Mr Matthews, I have received your letter, about renewing the contract and pay more rent. I'm interested to continue

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stay since it is convenient for my office ,

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I would

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like to highlight the problems which I'm facing. The central ac is freezing up outside due to that it is not working efficiently and the kitchen sink water is not flushing out properly. All these problems were already notified to you many times with photos through email and over the phone. It is almost a year ,

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it is not fixed. I would request you to take immediate action to fix the above-mentioned issues

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before the contract

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. Yours sincerely Prabjeet

Submitted by prabjeetkaur20 on Tue Jun 15 2021

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

114 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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