It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

Nowadays so many
people
are planning to visit a holiday spot mostly during national holidays.
This
will create many
problems
like accommodation,
food
etc. one of the vital
solution
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for
this
problem
is to plan our tour during non-season. In
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we will discuss both
problems
and
also
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for it.
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of the major
problem
that
people
face was
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in flight
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charges. They will hit the sky.
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it
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people
even suffer
with
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unavailability
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the unavailability
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of proper
food
for children and old
people
who have visited the tourist place. One more major
problem
is they don't find proper accommodation if they don't book in advance.
For example
, during
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ramadan
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my friend's family visited Abha which is a hill station in KSA. They said that they faced many
problems
with the non-availability of
food
for children and they
also
said that they are unable to get a room in a hotel as they haven't reserved any room. To tackle
this
problem
one has to plan their tour during non-holidays or non-season.
Furthermore
, governments have to launch new programmes like limiting the number of visitors to the tourist place and
also
increase the infrastructure of the city like roads,
publictransportation
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public transportation
etc. In conclusion, travelling during public holidays have so many
problems
like
non affordability
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of flight rates,
food
and accommodation are the major
problems
that can result in
people
health
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issues
issue
,
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it can be addressed by governments new programmes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overcrowding
  • increased prices
  • environmental damage
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • cultural degradation
  • limited availability
  • waiting lines
  • tourist attractions
  • conflict
  • local residents
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