It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?
Nowadays so many
people
are planning to visit a holiday spot mostly during national holidays. This
will create many problems
like accommodation, food
etc. one of the vital solution
for Change to a plural noun
solutions
this
problem
is to plan our tour during non-season. In this
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we will discuss both Add a comma
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problems
and also
solution
for it.
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a solution
the solution
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problem
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face was raise
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people
even suffer with
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unavailability
of proper Add an article
the unavailability
food
for children and old people
who have visited the tourist place. One more major problem
is they don't find proper accommodation if they don't book in advance. For example
, during this
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my friend's family visited Abha which is a hill station in KSA. They said that they faced many Add a comma
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problems
with the non-availability of food
for children and they also
said that they are unable to get a room in a hotel as they haven't reserved any room.
To tackle this
problem
one has to plan their tour during non-holidays or non-season. Furthermore
, governments have to launch new programmes like limiting the number of visitors to the tourist place and also
increase the infrastructure of the city like roads, publictransportation
etc.
In conclusion, travelling during public holidays have so many Correct your spelling
public transportation
problems
like non affordability
of flight rates, Add a hyphen
non-affordability
food
and accommodation are the major problems
that can result in people
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