Most information about culture and history can be found on the Internet, so museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

The globe net saves the huge flow of different data, providing the access to variational information in all fields of our lives, in
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, cultural heritage and historical events are
also
available for learning on the Internet. In
this
cause, there exists the opinion that visiting museums have outlived their usefulness.
However
, I cannot agree with
this
idea. Fistful,
people
can observe items and
artifacts
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in real life by visiting museums in
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manner. It expressed in a different and realistic experience.
For instance
, if
people
go to the museum, they can find out how was the life of
people
who lived in the different period. They can imagine that they are in that same time and place, and they get impressions from
this
kind of event.
Secondly
, seeing modern exhibitions can unite
people
because
this
event could be spent in a group with
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,
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school
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tour or
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family
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weekend.
For example
,
this
event could be a type of team building for white
weeters
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writers
tweeters
waters
, to take a break from routine work and to talk with colleagues in the
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atmosphere.
Moreover
, school tours could
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a sense of beauty and attract students, if even they just prefer
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the social nets. To conclude, the Internet resources of culture and history have
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fast and convenient access, no tickets and
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huge data, but all these benefits would not replace the sense of reality and cohesion. A nation’s historical and cultural treasures abound in museums and there must be maintained.
Submitted by Мария Сидельникова on

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