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In The Past, When Students Did A University Degree, They Tended To Study In Their Own Country

#students #university #study #country
Earlier
students
 did their hired education in their own country, but in the
last
 few years due to
the
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globalization
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students
 have decided to complete their university or masters abroad. There are those that believe
this
 development has only advantages whereas there are others that claim studying abroad is a negative development.The benefits and drawbacks of
this
 statement will be discussed in the following essay. On the one hand, there are clear advantages to studying abroad. One important benefit is that the independence level for the
students
 especially the young ones will definitely increase.
In other words
, when a student moves into another country he/she has to deal with the real face of the world without any
of
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support
of
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 their parents.
For instance
, working and studying at the same time, so they can be able to pay their rent and education fees at the end of the month, needless to
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 they have to do the household chores on their own.
However
,
on the other hand
, there are definite disadvantages to letting young
students
to
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study abroad. One significant
drawbacks
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 it is that in numerous countries student who
travel
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 to study prefer to settle down there. To be specific, after creating a whole new life and maybe starting a family it becomes extremely hard to start all over again.
As a result
, there will be huge losses for some countries, where the bright minds will not go back to their countries and contribute
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 development of it. In conclusion,there are both merits and demerits
tostudying
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to studying
studying
 abroad, as described above. In my opinion, migration can help the
students
 to gain new experiences and get to learn more about new cultures
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in addition
 to
be
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 in touch with people from different backgrounds.
Nevertheless
, some of them might suffer from loneliness and severe cultural shock.
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