Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree.

Technology is burgeoning day by day,as new inventions come into use mainly for
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some of the pros and cons of using
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application for making friends. On the one hand, the benefits of the usage of apps for communication and making friends are like, the person can make the conversations with any corner of the world.Technology advanced and spread all over the world, which facilitate
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cheaper communication even the person lives 100 or 1000 miles away.
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communities, families come closer and shares the knowledge on a common platform.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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