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These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

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It is a plain truth that the increasing number of
men
 likely take on the role of housekeepers. Meanwhile, more
women
 become the breadwinner in their family. It seems to me that there are several reasons for
this
 phenomenon. Personally,
i
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 consider it has positive advancement. Both
men
 and
women
 adapt to various changes in society.
To begin
 with, equal right movements will make progress. It is normal to make
women
to
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gain their qualification to pursue a career. It is
also
 socially acceptable for
men
 to stay at home to take care of children.
In addition
, the rising cost of living means both marriage partners need to work in order to save money before starting a family.
Thus
, when couples have children they have decisions about who work or who stay at home.
This
 reality is depending on their personal preference as well as each partner or on which partner earn more money. From my point of view, the aforementioned change is seen with much progress.
First
 and foremost, it is considered the happiness of
the
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life in a society where
men
 and
women
 are equal opportunities, and in which
women
 do not under pressure to sacrifice their careers. On balance, it is reckoned that the changing roles of
men
 and
women
 result into
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 range which changes society, and I am convinced by these developments in desirable
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